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Re: Dream World
This was an interesting narrative. I really liked the concept. However, at certain points in the story, I lost track of who was who. You might consider making it a ...
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: Polluted Lives
“Your needed at the base,” replied Carter. You're, not your. That was the only grammatical error that I could find. The other complaints I have with this have more to ...
Jul 7, 2009
